Date: 2005-08-21 04:11 am (UTC)
worst orientation ever

poor use of narrative structure, no characters (? prose?), no setting, no gentle caressing lead in for the reader

you'll have to try a lot harder if you want to achieve a band 5 result, let alone band 6

see me after class
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